Dear sir robert: .
I was thinking in you when I remember that you left your machine in my house.I was on my job when I make a very big mistake, I think this error will take me to the ruins. I was write with out oupen her mouth they fired me.
I run to my house your time machine I open it and I press all the botons so when I open my eyes i was in my job. that macihne is incredible ! i cant tell you what macnific is this machine one dai will do to your houseand you will so it.
kiss
max
You have lots of mistakes. The idea is not wrong, but next time make sure you hand in the drafts so that you can profit from the corrections.
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