In literature class with Laura we reed a story in "Stories or our selfs" called my greatest ambitions after this the teacher give as an instruction that said: "You are either morris fathers or mother after his first comic stript got publish. Write Your theought in three or four paragraph.
Oh my baby, i am very proud of him! I will call all the family and tell them that morris could puclish his comic. I am for my little child, I will surpprise him with a gift and I would like celebrated his triunph
More than proud I am very happy! because since he publishhis comic now he is always with a smile in his face in the another side i am afraid of this to end very soon! but often all if he is happy with himself I am too.
I hope y husband pay more atention to aur lovely child instead of speending so mutch time to our economy.
Cata: Try to be more careful when you type. There are many spelling mistakes I think you could have avoided through revision.
ResponderEliminarYou´ve written a beautiful piece, the mother´s voice sounds really sweet. I also think you should have developed your paragraphs some more.
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